From 398658aaa92f291fd75d9deb750babe25fd6113e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ryan Date: Wed, 31 Jul 2013 14:45:12 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Copy edit for clarity and grammar Changed "On your site or blog in no time. As easy as 1-2-3" to "TimelineJS works on any site or blog. Make your own in four easy steps" Changed "Create a spreadsheet" to "Create your spreadsheet" Changed "It's as simple as dropping dates ..." to "Drop dates, text and links in to the appropriate columns." --- website/templates/_make.html | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/website/templates/_make.html b/website/templates/_make.html index 66f157e..ab80a82 100644 --- a/website/templates/_make.html +++ b/website/templates/_make.html @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@

Make a Timeline

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On your site or blog in no time. As easy as 1-2-3 (video tutorial)

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TimelineJS works on any site or blog. Make your own in four easy steps. (video tutorial)

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Create a new Spreadsheet

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Create a new Google Spreadsheet using our template. It’s as simple as dropping a date, text, and links into the appropriate columns.

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Create your spreadsheet

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Build a new Google Spreadsheet using our template. Drop dates, text and links to media into the appropriate columns.

Google Spreadsheet Template

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Publish to Web

Under the File menu, select “Publish to the Web.”

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In the next window, check the box next to “Automatically republish when changes are made.” Uncheck all other boxes. Click “start publishing.” This will give you the URL to embed in your HTML file.

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In the next window, check “Automatically republish when changes are made.” Uncheck all other boxes. Click “start publishing.” This will give you the URL to embed in your HTML file.

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Copy/paste URL into the generator

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Copy/paste spreadsheet URL into the generator box below

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