From cbd445733156de205d5df2a12260114cc88b90b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ryan <rcgraff@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 31 Jul 2013 14:29:48 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Copy edit for clarity and grammar

Made small edit to "How it Works Section", added "beginners can create ..." and "Experts can use their JSON skills ..."
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   <h2>How it Works</h2>
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     <div class="span6">
-      <p>TimelineJS is an open-source tool that enables you to build visually-rich interactive timelines from different sources. Creating one is as easy as filling in a Google spreadsheet or as detailed as JSON.</p>
+      <p>TimelineJS is an open-source tool that enables anyone to build visually,rich, interactive timelines. Beginners can create a timeline using nothing more than a Google spreadsheet. Experts can use their JSON skills to create custom installations, while keeping TimelineJS's core look and functionality.</p>
       <h4>Sources</h4>
-      <p>It can pull in media from different sources and has built in support for: <em>Twitter, Flickr, Google Maps, YouTube, Vimeo, Vine, Dailymotion, Wikipedia, SoundCloud and more media types are added regularly.</em></p>
+      <p>It can pull in media from a variety of sources and has built-in support for: <em>Twitter, Flickr, Google Maps, YouTube, Vimeo, Vine, Dailymotion, Wikipedia, SoundCloud and more media types are added regularly.</em></p>
 
       <h4>Tips &amp; tricks</h4>
       <ol>
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     </div>
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