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Changed "On your site or blog in no time. As easy as 1-2-3" to "TimelineJS works on any site or blog. Make your own in four easy steps"
Changed "Create a spreadsheet" to "Create your spreadsheet"
Changed "It's as simple as dropping dates ..." to "Drop dates, text and links in to the appropriate columns."
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<div class="row"> <div class="row">
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<h2>Make a Timeline</h2> <h2>Make a Timeline</h2>
<p>On your site or blog in no time. As easy as 1-2-3 (<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vAWbm4gF9lU">video tutorial</a>)</p> <p>TimelineJS works on any site or blog. Make your own in four easy steps. (<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vAWbm4gF9lU">video tutorial</a>)</p>
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<div class="step row"> <div class="step row">
<h2 class="span1">1</h2> <h2 class="span1">1</h2>
<div class="span11"> <div class="span11">
<h4>Create a new Spreadsheet</h4> <h4>Create your spreadsheet</h4>
<p>Create a new Google Spreadsheet using our <a href="https://drive.google.com/previewtemplate?id=0AppSVxABhnltdEhzQjQ4MlpOaldjTmZLclQxQWFTOUE&mode=public" target="_blank" >template</a>. It’s as simple as dropping a date, text, and links into the appropriate columns.</p> <p>Build a new Google Spreadsheet using our <a href="https://drive.google.com/previewtemplate?id=0AppSVxABhnltdEhzQjQ4MlpOaldjTmZLclQxQWFTOUE&mode=public" target="_blank" >template</a>. Drop dates, text and links to media into the appropriate columns.</p>
<p><a href="https://drive.google.com/previewtemplate?id=0AppSVxABhnltdEhzQjQ4MlpOaldjTmZLclQxQWFTOUE&mode=public" target="_blank" class="btn">Google Spreadsheet Template</a></p> <p><a href="https://drive.google.com/previewtemplate?id=0AppSVxABhnltdEhzQjQ4MlpOaldjTmZLclQxQWFTOUE&mode=public" target="_blank" class="btn">Google Spreadsheet Template</a></p>
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<div class="span6"> <div class="span6">
<p><img class="img-rounded img-polaroid" src="{{ static_url }}/img/make/publish_to_web_url_small.png" alt="Publish to Web"></p> <p><img class="img-rounded img-polaroid" src="{{ static_url }}/img/make/publish_to_web_url_small.png" alt="Publish to Web"></p>
<p>Under the File menu, select <em>&ldquo;Publish to the Web.&rdquo;</em></p> <p>Under the File menu, select <em>&ldquo;Publish to the Web.&rdquo;</em></p>
<p>In the next window, check the box next to <em>&ldquo;Automatically republish when changes are made.&rdquo;</em> Uncheck all other boxes. Click <em>&ldquo;start publishing.&rdquo;</em> This will give you the URL to embed in your HTML file.</p> <p>In the next window, check <em>&ldquo;Automatically republish when changes are made.&rdquo;</em> Uncheck all other boxes. Click <em>&ldquo;start publishing.&rdquo;</em> This will give you the URL to embed in your HTML file.</p>
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<form class="step row form form-horizontal"> <form class="step row form form-horizontal">
<h2 class="span1">3</h2> <h2 class="span1">3</h2>
<div class="span11"> <div class="span11">
<h4>Copy/paste URL into the generator</h4> <h4>Copy/paste spreadsheet URL into the generator box below</h4>
<div class="control-group"> <div class="control-group">
<label class="control-label"> Google Spreadsheet or other <a href="#fileformat" data-scroll="true">data source URL</a></label> <label class="control-label"> Google Spreadsheet or other <a href="#fileformat" data-scroll="true">data source URL</a></label>
<div class="controls"> <div class="controls">
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</section> </section>

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